good work man, this was a really real piece. It's cool when shit is real, because al ot of the time its abstract and hard to understand...lol I just wrote a piece that like that. Your flow fell off a few times, but it was generally pretty good
Check out my new one "the straw that broke the camel's back"
Peace

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