this is the first verse of my first song so check it out and get back

Yo when me and my niggaz get in the streat and straight ride/
ya betta hope our paths dont collide/
ya betta slide aside/
cause the gats we provide/
straight make ya flesh divide/
havin ya skin rip open/
havin ya hopin/
that we gonna leave/
so ya pain can be relieved/
but i got a knife up my sleave/
and i gotta make a nigga bleed/
cause ima evil seed/
sent from hell/
but it's ya'll city i dwell/
i be up in a motel/
harassin niggas on my cell/
then i catch a nigga in a dark street/
grab a big ass knife and start tearin off meat/
sheet by sheet/
laya by laya/
im the ill rhyme saya/
thats also a human slaya/
ill just grab a gat and spray ya/
cause i dont give a fuck/
im too happy ta get a nigga stuck/

chorus 2x
im an evil seed sent from the devil/
i murda niggas on any level/
im straight not givvin a fuck/
straight gettin niggas stuck/
and ya know what yall just straight givin it up/