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Old 05-22-03, 10:24 PM   #20
Chrit
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aight here it is....

felt both verses but I'ma go with blaze on some better punches...

inspire, some of your punches seemed forced

and balze your first line you tried for too many syllables fitting together, lost the flow there but picked it back up

good battle
vote: blaze