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Old 05-22-03, 11:31 PM   #28
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aight this shit ws kinda ill dawg some of my fave lines by x

my shits mean like “definitions”, Check ya condition, I got ya “prescriptions

i like that wordplay and multiplay

Nigga after i get done wit you, ima disrespect ya crew., cause they aint shit.......
get ready to take this ill-lethal-lyricist hit

that was ill dawg nice way to open ya battle and i like the structure

y fave lines by deezy


ya you gon' be an ill lethal lryicst when i'ma be done rippin open yo apendix,
you mo' of a pussy a than sucka, you gettin off afta just a couple of licks,

i didnt necessarily like that uh wordplay to mucha and an attempt at a hot personal

ya won't be needin no muscle rub cuz ya only ready Ben-Gay

lmao now that shit was funny.

aight good battle both of ya'll so breakdown

flow-deezy
multis-x
metas-x
wordplay-x
structure-x
originality-both
punches-x
disses-both

overall-x

my vote=xplicit