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Old 05-23-03, 10:53 AM   #14
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was an excellent peice...very nicely written,nice flow,good bar length,topic,was all ill....i felt you on this alot,the pressure onthe cranium,should i got left,right or wrong,that was an ill use of th ewords....whats a beezlebub?...liked how you mentioned the straws keep on mounting on you,capture the theif<nice,add more stresses to my plate....ill imagery throughout,can tell you been stressed heavy before eh....if not...they you know what your tlakin about ....my former nonchalance<niceness...aint heard that word in a time...i need to mentaly excrete,my skull flush....<<<<excellent ideas behind this....im sorry if im gettin ghte lines wrong,but yaknow,these are just fragments that i remeber and like from when i read it about 30 seconds ago ahha............the mountain of straw is piling,my soul at its peak...<<<WOO!! imagery,niceness! ....excellent post understatement,i liek your name too,i dunnowhy this is getting slept on...oh yes i do....its long,cats dont like reading....strange people..........keep droppin this ill shit....likin it...


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