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Old 05-23-03, 12:16 PM   #18
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killa t came way harder to me and the fact that6 young brown shit was prewritten made u lok realy stupid.

my fave lines from young brown

now im not sayin u had a bad verse and im not givin killa the vote cuz urs was pre-written his was just overall better

you couldn’t have a hard frame if you was a volvo-bitch/

like the multis

yeah my shit’s pre-written, don’t act like yours isn’t/
I get a challenge, write for two minutes, and start spittin/

i like the wordplay and the diss

you’re now MC TOILET, cuz I just shitted on ya/

hall of fame that line is really played terrible finisher

overall

flow-good
multis-good
metas-poor
orignality/creativity-poor
structure-good
wordplay-good
punches-poor
disses-excellent

overall 5/10

my fave lines from killa

u had a good verse and i like how u wrote yours like it was a street battle verse

when u 'bust shots' IT'LL REMIND US, how ur 'weak-in-the-back-bone', so theres no need-to-attack-domes or CRIPPLE WIT NINES PUNK//

to me thats when y shouldve opened ya battle the other shit wasnt 2 good

now your 'pectus is open', i guess my 'TEKS A SURGEON', now i TASTE UR HEART N RIBS then BLAZE UR CARTILEDGE//7(im hungry

i like the multis in there


neither one of u finished ya verse good but u had the overall better verse

flow-good
multis-excellent
metas-excellent
punches-excellent
disses-average
wordplay-excellent
structure-fabolous

overall 8/10

my vote=mc killa-t