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Well, interesting topic, but I wasn't feeling it. Not only because of that but just because of the spelling, the flow, the whole thing. It could have been more interesting. The first few lines were ok but when I got to that "makes me the antichrist" line I lost all interest. Good thing it was short or I wouldn't have finished it all.
"and for that as i see him die i will wait.
till he calls me his lord,
and at that verry momment i will thenswpie the sword.
to end his life here is what is left..... "
Those lines were a little disturbing. I dunno if you're serious about this or just desperate for a topic to write on?
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