Was a good post. A lot of emotion in it. Hootie's right, this stuff don't need to rhyme.

"i fell pressured to suceed but dont kno if i will
sometimes i get so angry i just want to kill
anything i do isnt good enough for them
i cant win with them anymore and living is hell
but if i ended my life theyd be so dissapointed"

That was a part I liked. I've felt like that before. The way you said it is exactly how I felt.

"every second of my life it was you have to be the best
what happend to all you can do is your best
there isnt anything more you can do..nohing less
nothing less but the windder would ever please them "

I liked that part too. You put a lot of feeling into this writing.

"buts its all theyre falt im this way, and that im going to hell
so thanks mom and thans dad for your tremendous support"

Thats the only part that I wasn't feeling. It's not my place to tell you what to do but don't blame them. Just pick yourself up and keep on going. Anyways, good post.