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Old 05-23-03, 05:18 PM   #2
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pretty safe rhyme soprano.
pretty good flow for the most part, i kinda lost it a couple parts
"Life I dont conserve when they dont deserve/
The monster is me I accept the force I feel the monster in my heart and my soul/"
good vocab and punchlines keep it up
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