damn dude, you spammed your own thread...
this was an okay drop, not that good, but not terrible either. It had some cool wordplay with the demons and shit, but the topic was kinda played out.
try to organize your bars so that it's easier to read:
bar1/
bar2/
bar3/
etc....That was you can see the syllables and rhyme scheme better while your write it too.
Keep droppin, you'll improve
check my piece "the straw that broke the camel's back"
Peace

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