OTIC
YOU CAME ILL WITH MULTIS AND SEMI AND PUNCHES. RHYME SCHEME WAS SIMPLE BUT NON-THE-LESS, IT WAS STILL A PRETTY ILL READ AND BATTLE VERSE.

SNYPER
OK IN MULTIS BUT NOT AS GOOD AS SNYPER'S. NICE PUNCHES AND NICE RHYME SCHEME. YOUR OPENER WAS ILL AND THE FLOW WAS ALSO NICE.

OVERALL
I HAVE TO GIVE THIS ONE TO SNYPER FOR A MORE COMPLEX VERSE THAT MADE IT HIT HARDER BUT NICE BATTLE TO BOTH OF YOU