see, this is soemthin where u are only focusing on the end of the phrases so u can rhyme wit da next line....Thats dumb becuz then half of ur shit doesnt even make sense. Pick a topic, stick to it, pick a flow, stick to it, (unless u change it up wit lettin people know) Then your rhymes will come along much more easier, stop focusin on the end, focus on the whole thing at once. I'm out...Payce