This was good. I liked how it read real easy but had feeling to it. Stuff like that is hard to do.

"I hate to see you sad, I'm happy when you smile...
I hug you for only moments, but it seems to last a while...
I like to hear your voice, so sometimes I don't speak...
I feel comfort when your around and kiss me on my cheek..."

I liked that part. It's usually backwards for me with the hugs line, though They seem like seconds when they're minutes.

The ending of it was good. Yeah, I liked this piece from you. Keep posting