Wow, that was a good piece. Only a few writers on here wrote about something so well that I really feel it even though I haven't been in that situation, and you're now one of them. The whole thing was good.

"A burden to your being that what you said i am
But you never let me down always making me a man
Showing me the way too live...the way to die
Saying women werent property... in females you must take pride
The good times too... playing football, showing me how to shave
Doing the opposite of what you said put you in your grave"

That one right there stood out to me the most. You used good words in it to get your point across. You put a lot of feeling into it to. I really felt it.

"My heart is crying out for you blaming myself
One more shot, wait no two, i put myself on the shelf
Why couldn't you take me? You didnt deserve it
That im an alchaholic and couldn't take that last hit
So I jumped in my truck, oblvious to the world
Driving down the interstate vomiting like it was the Tilt-A-Whirl

As I was leaning back over I swerved and isn't it my luck
It was a complete stranger, it was my family i killed with that truck"

When I read those parts I started feeling bad like that happened to me. You wrote this good. I can see why you won some state awards for this. It was definately deep and written well. Keep posting more like this.