please tell me you are not seriously considering this to be a verse.
this one of the wackest things I have ever read.
Rule #1 : don't make up words unless the might look like real
words or have some relevence to the piece you are writing.
Rule#2 : have something that kinda flows, or at least bars with
the same or close to the same amount of syllables.
Rule#3 : don't write about your cock unless it's in a clever way
with amusing wordplay and multis. Actually, fuck that
don't write about your cock.

I would've added shit about wordplay and more advanced vocab,
but I don't think you're ready for that yet.
Don't drop stupid shit, it makes you look bad
Peace

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