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"Stolen"

You took it all away from me
Everything I could ever be
With a simple twist of your wrist, I fall to the Floor
I lie there, Dazed, As you walk out my door
Dark blood stains form beside me on the ground
I slightly open my eyes and look around
I try desperatly to move, Though I Fail
My eyes grow hazy, and my Face grows Pale
My Cold eyes Role back into my head
As I lie on the Floor, Almost dead
Thick blood begins to trickle down my dry, cold lips
I gently touch the wound with my fingertips
I feel my hair Fall over my face
As I lay, Motionless, In my own place
I grab onto a Table leg, and tighten my grip
Every nerve in my body, Begins to slightly twitch
My arms are stretched out
Not knowing what this is about
On the Floor, The blood puddle thickens, Leaving a bigger stain
As I feel my Last bit of Life drain
All my dreams have been broken
And my life has been Stolen.