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Old 05-25-03, 03:08 AM   #30
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i show men that i will rip of their legs to de'feet' them and cut off their 'height' as a sign/
Feeble, the de"feet" lines are played... and you need to shorten your bars, get straight to the point....

alpha, your verse was overall an average one...
comin' off the top, hittin' hard, like Bungee jumpers, wit snapped cords;
join the crowd, my dick's somethin everyone's ridin' on, like a FORD...
^^those lines however... are played...

vote=alphabet... he just came harder and was more consistent... pz
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