I think you got some great skills and wordplay going on there. You where hittin with everything you said,
pretty creative, most of da young cats probaly wont get ya skill play and wording...
I have to say tweak da first verse abit, i agree wit da other cat, long short long keep it all da same.Jumping
round abit.

Second verse was great i really feel shit, you'd go well i battles...
Nice flow and wordplay keep dat shit up dawg cause i was feeling it...