hey yo kapone - i kno a lotta SHIT gets posted here but im seriously lookin for some feedback so plz dont close my thread...

here are some of my fav' lines from the couple of battles ive had tell me what u think. I know im no elite but i think some of these are alright.....

I land lines that land like land mines i freeze time when i break ryhmes//
VS Golden Gramz

somewhere - out there - is a 'brand new kitchen'//
go there - cook there - and 'quit yo bitchin'//
VS hottie7

darkforce crossed his own path and gave himself bad luck//
right here i confused this black cat fuck//
VS darkforce

feed me back and post yo fav 1 or 2 lines from a battle or open mic of urs