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Originally posted by Chrit
Sorry to break the news but you lost this game of twenty one/
You got a twenty and I pulled blackjack I guess that means Chrit won(1)/
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CHRIT HAD A PERFECT ENDING...
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Originally posted by Chrit
Bout to give the new kid lesson in elevation by spitting the perfect words/
Watch him crumble like OJ's defense he's worried when not fighting herbs/
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^^I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IN THE MIDDLE OF YOUR RHYME, ITS LIKE YOU FELL OFF N PERSONALLY I DONT KNOW ANYONE WHO STILL CALLS PEOPLE HERBS...
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Originally posted by QB SNYPER
who's this proper~dude, dunno, but I'll beat you til your oddish-blue/
while you "stack" with "more filler lines" than a "pile of college-ruled"/
I'll roll-back-and-pitch, a whole-batch-of-clips/
cuz chrit won't kill, it's not "in his character" like he got "wrote-out-the-script"/
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THOSE 4 LINES DID IT FOR ME, IT WAS HOT.
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Originally posted by QB SNYPER
better than you, I come twice-as-good, while you stay home wit' a mic-and-hood/
"Shittin" around with your "bars" like "bathin after not whipin'-good"/
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ENDING WAS PERFECT AS WELL SO I'LL GIVE THE BREAKDOWN...
METAPHORS..QB
PUNCHES..BOTH (MOSTLY QB)
CREATIVITY..BOTH
PERSONALS..CHRIT
MULTIS..QB
COMPLEXITY..CHRIT
FLOW..BOTH
OVERALL..QB
I FEEL CHRIT HELD BACK TOO MUCH & COULDA DID BETTER.