It wasn't bad. This piece came off to me as you writing exactly what was going on in your head. I liked that. Kind of short but you still did good with putting a lot of info in a few words.

blind from realitly
who am I even suppose to be
I can't survive this complicated life
my world is caving in on me
closing in on me

I feel like that sometimes. Especially the last 2 lines. Nice job.