Light Weight
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IP:
The last one I read from you was the one where I thought you were describing hell. You told me that that one could be interpreted different ways and this one seems the same way. Like you said, you don't really cater to the reader and don't go into exactly what's going on. I like that. It's fun trying to imagine what it's about, and actually thinking about it.
I dunno if this will make me look like an idiot cause I may be waaay off here but when I read it I thought about war or something like that.
"Doom days beckon upon sunny hills
As the children play in bliss of innocence
Leaders stand tall with defiant words
Screams of joy to fall into fears' trap..."
I guess the 3rd line in that is what made me think the war thing. The 4th line made me think like the soldiers yelling and screaming ready for war..getting fired up, then starting to get scared right before it happens.
"Dawn soon comes to smell of rotting..
Amidst the soothing sounds of streams
Whilst blooded sons go to die in vein
For green desire of the fat cats reign"
The first line here made me think they went all night fighting and in the morning there was a lot of bodies and death. Then that 3rd line where it says blooded sons go to die in vein, well that made me think it was about war too. Like back in the old days..
lol, I think I tried to explain why I thought this way just in case I was way off with what you were really trying to say. Even if I was, I liked reading it.
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