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Old 05-25-03, 05:01 PM   #6
Baron Mynd.
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<---------- Camarac.

I thought this was pretty good man, i havent read any of your pieces in a long ass time since before we collabed in fact, this was pretty good, flow was nice, bars were too short to really do anything with, try to make each one around 13-16 syllables to get the flow down, it wasnt a bad piece though Wooshy, reply to mine when you get time.
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