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Old 05-25-03, 05:56 PM   #63
billy
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god die........

your thinkin a punchline as a comedian would.......the end to a joke......

although thats what it is and funny punchlines are needed to give the verse some atmosphere and humor........

i did not mean punchlines in a comedian sense......

punchlines are the part of a verse that hit the hardest.....
wether funny or angry......

wut i was sayin was that your entire verse shouldnt not be one big joke.....casue thats how i took his verse....as a joke...

you gotta come hard........and spliv did it jokingly......it was funny.... and you need some humor but when it sounds like a stand up comedian wrote this verse....it takes away the whole battling effect......

your takin the word punchline too seriously..........
i would explain wut a punchline is but im sure you know that right???????