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Old 05-25-03, 09:48 PM   #6
caspah
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ur right i shoulda gave some explenation sorry

i thought tha topic was mad played, played to tha point that its pretty much wack

tha rhymes were aiight but what they were sayin was just kinda dumb i thought

Forget it back to the battle, I can't let this *Emcee* make my brains rattle.


Im tearin at my hair, wonderin should I say *Fuck It* would the crowd even care.

Aight Im white bitch i know I aint black, It's down pat, fuck it I drop the mic down flat, as I hear laugs at my fuckin back, I turn around and cock the fuckin Gat!!

tha fact these stood on their own didnt help things either, plus that was ur second time sayin its down pat which is pretty simple and doesnt sound good being repeated in a sucha short verse

thats why i thought it was wack
im sure u can do better then this neway
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