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Great idea. Yea yea, it was funny. But most of you guys gotta really read it.
Lyrically, this was tight. The flow wasn't perfect, but it was close enough. I turned on the beat to this and spit it to see how it went, good shit. One problem with this parody. In "Many Men" by 50, and in your version of it, alot of the rhyming words are the same. You want to make it different. Just one thing to stay away from.
Otherwise, good drop man. Why is it stickied tho? Just 'cause you MOD this don't mean your drops should be stickied. Not being an asshole, just telling you.
Peep the link titled "Reflection of Fate" in my sig.
pZ!
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