Three Weeks Later She Takes The Test Cuz Her Cycle Has Not Come
She Watches The Dot Change Colours and Fear Begins to Make her Numb
The Man and Father Had Bolted After that magical OnE Night Stand
She Found him and He Said " The Condom Broke, This Was Not Planned"
This Woman I Speak Of In This Rhyme Is Still Strong and Very Brave
But The Man Who Got Her Pregnant Lie Very still in His Grave

a love those lines a lot really good wordplay in them great twist at the end..so true lol

So many Things Overlooked and Not Noticed Or Mentioned
You Have No Comprehension of the Dimension of Tension
The Love Of Two People , Had Been Child Hood Friends
One Transcends Over The Other and They Never Made Amends

and that was heat felt....a think anyways maybe am readin too much into it

overall really ill drop a think n e ways..hope ya win in yo battle