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This was...amazing, man. Absolutely amazing. I normally don't read a whole lot of the open mics but I'm glad I clicked this one. I liked how you described everything so well. Telling how the water had ripples in it an all that.
The concept was really good. I've never read anything like that before. You definately have a very good imagination. By the way, you a Christian?
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