Aight ha ha. For your first post it was nice actually I thought it was str8 cuz thats what I used to rhyme like. Once your on here longer you will learn mo shit and new techniques. But, all and all that was good. I aint gonna eat on you fo that one.

Most of the shit was like I guess soft but since yo new it wont matter a bit. You do got potential I can see that already.

(Quote)your rhymes move at the speed of doctor seuss
but mine are like a rapid dog let loose,
of the chain and in your brain,
every word I say hits your ass like a train.(Qoute)

That was a few nice lines there bro. I hope I aint writtin to much Im juss sayin what I think. Anyway keep evaluating and one day you will be much higher. You juss to up yo *Vocab* skills a bit, which means like use bigger words.
(I have no room to talk though, but I am tryin)

But, aight man good shit.

holla at yo boy

~ShEmY~