brad--- what up dawg.. lol, I a'ready read this at my house on friday.. but I figured I'd give some constructive criticism since you my boy 'n' all.. It was mad simple rhyme/ bar structure, which pro'lly helped the flow alot.. had some deep lyrics in it but not deep in the sense that it made you think it was more a "nod my head" and agree kinda deep.. word-play's getting better as you elevate more, vocab's still not too great, but all it takes is practice... ne-way, holla.. be sure to responde to other peeps rhymes, you wont get slept on as much if you do..

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