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Old 05-26-03, 01:24 PM   #9
Dadi Kewl
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From: England
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Yo both came hot on this one
Knight blew me away wit his multies, great flow an' wordplay

"And If You Lead Followers In The Wrong Road I Will Lead to The-Path!!!
Rocky Roads And Harsh,Mountains Will Emerge And watch Peeps Yearn-There-Faith,
We All Apart Of Gods Green Earth and We all Have To Earn-a-Place,
My Life and The Lord Is All I Know And Im Screamin-At-The-Heavens,
I Take A Look At This World And KnightShade Beaming-At-The-Peasents!!!"

Rounded the end of really nicey, tight stuff.

Av Wordplay Was spot,
flowed well and had a good element of complexity.

"meaning is often pure... dropped... lost and dead to society,
sold souls to Adam and Ghandi... Handed Al Sharpton my heart for notoriety..."
Nice^^

"Solely sought... and often bought... sweatin bullets to load guns...
reloaded the fun... we all walkin in programs,
programmed to walk... and talk with grams and fight with harsh hands..."
Liked alot^^

Overall this piece was tight, well put together
and is madd to read

9/10

Good piece

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