where you live vortex??...forget that tupac lving wannabe rapper faggot...he dunno wah thes saying...i owuld spit somethign but im new guy on this shit...ahahhaha<<herbish........


niceness verse vrotex...that kid sounds like me,apart fom the getting successfuil batlign cats and getting recognition part..lmao...the cocaine...was...no longer...thank god.but i understand how he feels,all i want is someone to listen to my shit and gimme a chance,nahmean,thats how i feel,thats how thi srhyme made me feel,it was a very distant way of goign a tth etopic,i enjoyed it,was a sad ending ...but a good one,he gave all his shit away to substance....tis a bad thing....i wonder how many cats end up doign that to themselves,its way to easy to do,i know that for a fact,so i fel tthis one majorliy vortex,nice rhyme scheme,nic ewords,good story,nicely written,to bad the other cat no showed,wouldve been hard competition...check out my verse against shabaz when its all set up and posted....shoudl be tomorrow ro the next day depending on the time ifference,and when shabaz posts....
couda been a helm,as in a helmet...but eh...at the helm...not such a good topic,but you did it well anyway dun...keep it up.

bismillah