ill verses from both of yall,good complements of style,no doubt well written,lovin avalon`s verse,the style is ill...knighshade using the mad multies to full effect...had a good story,motive,point thing...stay strong through hardship an such,god an death,thats wha ti thgouht it was nayway...but if im wrong.apologies

when the Bushes of pussies stay up north... creatin terrorism from the white house
^^excellent ending

Av's searchin for Pops in citys... like Christina and Justin tours...
meaning is often pure... dropped... lost and dead to society,
^^those lines were tight,the first...made me laugh,then the second was serous,and made me think abou tshit...avalon be righ tbaou t,pure meanign being overloked like noone cares,shits ill...

If I Could Explain The Emotion That These Words was Meant-To-Do,
^^nice line,mad correct


Plenty-Races...What Would The World Be If People Had Empty-Faces,
^^shits mad true,another nice line from knightshade...



My Life and The Lord Is All I Know And Im Screamin-At-The-Heavens,
^^my favourite line,shit was awesome,great ending,the looking down on th elight ont he peasnts was niceness straight after this line...


it was an ill spit from oth yall,nice vocab,good multies,emotion came through,shit was ill...



can you return the favour on myself and mentills collab..its being mad slept on...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49885


bismillah