You kept it alive the whole time, which was pretty long, but the fact that it didnt really get boring or lose the flow was crucial. I love the line,
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side step to the right and back twice to the left,would you end up in the same place?or face the other step//
laced with land mines, the devil looking up smiles shaking minds with god up above,for creating such perfect design/
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thats fuckinnice!!!!!! Usually i dont like longer rhymes because people lose focus and flow but you did neither damn fine work!