"We could sit and reminess a bit, about how it was to get hit, every time your stepdad felt like it//
Or how you witnessed him in his animalistic nature, each time he awakened my sister, then fondeled and raped her//
Maybe it was a mistake to think times would change, when he calmed down and climbed out of his irratate,rage//
Or could it be from the age of 8 till highschool, that Bob thought it was cool to beat me into a pool of blood and drewl//"

This was real. I hate reading about things like this since it makes me feel bad but it happens. You wrote about it well. It was a good piece. Made me think about all the bad things that go on and appreciate what I have. I dunno, this was just a really good writing. I'm glad I read it.