Not too many replies. I'm confused about that. You usually have a lot of them. Anyways, this was a good post. I liked reading it. Your style of writing is good. The words you use keeps me reading more. Normally I don't read ones that are kind of long unless they are a good writer.

"this heaven sent creature with spanish eyes should have run
but then stayed to embrace a face only a mother could have loved"

I liked those lines. Made me laugh

"i hear one's, it seems cupid upgraded artillery to a spear gun
to give me a change of heart, maybe, but life's a come what may"

That was another part I liked. I could quote so much more but I get carried away with doing that and don't want the response to be so long. Good piece though.