yo, it was pretty good for a new-comer.. had a good flow, wordplay and vocab were not the best but still for a newbie they were good.. you need to elevate more, tha's all I really got to say.. stay up, keep active, practice and you'll get better... holla

don't sleep on my shit:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=50499

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