Wow, this was good. I liked the topic and how you stuck to it the whole time. The flow was a little rough but I liked the topic so much I didn't let that bother me. I completely agree with all of what you said.

"yall no how many mutha fucking jews got killed for nothin/
yall no how many mutha fucking africans die a day cus they starvin/
yall goin home eatin as much as u like, fuck me a afro eats in a year wat u chuck in the bin a day/"

Those lines were really good. I think about that type of thing all the time and try to appreciate my life no matter what's happening in it.

"well disengage yo mind n think, its not the end, its a fuckin sighn/
go out yo front door, walk right past that dirty whore/
you on a journy now, ur on that sidewalk/
think about it, that sidewalk leads anywhere, its like gettin trapped in a river i swear/
u can turn left or right or carry on up dat road, who knows where you'll go/
u see my point, ur makin those choices not me or ur mutha fuckin G/"

Some more really goood lines. You hit some really good topics when talking about this.

"u might be big and tough, but remember their is always some1 bigger then you/"

^so true..

When I first opened it I was thinking "ah hell, another long one..", cause normally I lose focus on the long ones, but this one held my attention. Good writing.