you should have set it up like this, its helps people see the flow

see shit holding be bac and slowin me up,
but despite these challenges i aint give up,
i continue going up tough against this earth,
fighting everyday since my birth,
i dont no if im gonna make it,
but if the oppurtunity arises im gonna take it,
i wont hesitate or stall cuz as soon as i do i may falter and fall,
so i keep going and fighting, espressing my thoughts in feelings when im writing, cant stop me now, aint noone know how...

god put me on this world with a curse
tomorrow u make awake and find me in the back of herse
but on the other hand im a soldier and going strong
maybe ill succeed, fullfilling my need as i go along

its ok but its two damn short that wouldnt even be a complete verse on a song,