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Old 05-27-03, 10:10 AM   #433
Deceit
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From: God
IP:

So you're a shadow, you copy other people's lines
And yet you still sound shit, i guess you can't rhyme
You came from under the soil, so you're dirty and faded
You should study others' rhymes cuz your style is jaded
Your punches evaded, your flow outdated,
Go up against a pensioner, maybe you'll get rated