Don't mean to be rude but topics like:
your last breath...
suck.

These topics are gay and for friggin, preschool kids... they're so boring and specific and are directed towards a story or point the verses in a direction...
in my experience (I'm not suggesting I know everything, but in comparison yours don't work as well) I've found that very broad topics are best and leave the most room for creativity on the part of the writer.

ex. simple topics
hell
abortion
infidelity
water
fingertips
red
alcoholism
breath
understanding
God
school
politics
terrorism
fire
dinosaurs
skeleton
eternal life
folktales
peanuts

those work really well because both verses will necessarity be directed the same way.

the diference between these and the topics you've been giving are that where I say skeleton
you would have said skeletons in the closet.... but that's gay...
let the writers be creative.

Peace

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