You're a good writer. Post more of your stuff up here I like reading it.

This was good. The flow was nice, words used were good, all around it was good.

"Could you love me, with all my flaws and blemishes?
When the novelty wears off, the excitement diminishes?
If I’m bare and true, is this real or will we be finished?"

I really felt those lines. I wonder the same things when I get into relationships. Unfortunately the few that I was in, the novelty did wear off and the excitement diminished.

"‘Cause I never lived until your eyes, breathed their vitality
Watching my fabricated moves, counteracting with finality
Stepping out of my dreams, incredibly you became a reality"

That was another good part that I felt a lot. I'm thinking that stuff about a girl I know right now. Very good writing.

"When you make love to me it’s intensity beyond all absolution
You clarify the worlds’ mysteries to me and shatter any confusion
And if this isn’t real, I pray I never recover from this delusion."

Good stuff right there. I can't apply that to my life but I just liked reading it. The way you worded it kept me reading more.

"I want to be your everything, what you rise in the morning to greet
To have a love with you that’s real and gentle, so true it’s discreet
‘Cause before your kiss, my soul can’t remember feeling so complete"

I like reading stuff like this and being able to see those things in my life. Those right there I saw. It made the writing better when reading it. I really liked this. Hopefully you post some more stuff on here