Good spit ---- deep shyt

check my first open mic post---
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50386

would appreciate your critique

who's yer fav--freestyler/artist

oh even though i've been told numerous times now that my first battle sucked----would like ta get some more advise/i posted many responses ta the first voters--at first I thought mine was better --- but since I'm new---I don't even know how ta judge that really--

check it out--
MystiQuest vs sen
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

I thought that mine at least was more creative & made more sense---maybe not---still learnin

peace

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