Yo Sand your talent gonna take u cross the land

really enjoyed it---showin in the newbie how high ya can take it
---i still have learni bta do--but got a lot in me--
any critique on my first open mic would be appreciated
thanks----

Mystical Minstrel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50386


peace-----I'll be searchin for more of yer stuff--ya have any in archives----