I don't really have any tips for you to get better since you're better than me at writing.

This type of poem is the kind that I like to read, among lots of others. I like it when the writer asks a lot of questions and seems confused cause that's how I am. Though, I'm not confused about any of the things you're talking about here, but I used to be. So I felt this one.

I could actually help you understand a lot of the things you wonder about here, if you're really looking to understand it.

Anyways, good post. I'll be looking out for more from you here.