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First Post- need feedback
IP:
I can’t stand it, I’m abandoned //
I wish I could just vanish to a better planet //
Find a dream to just grab it //
I fell on my face; I just slammed it, DAMN IT! //
Why can’t I succeed, all I want for me, is you to believe //
In the words that I speak //
Open your eyes, its time to start seeing //
I’m not a freak, I’m a human being //
Who’s always dreaming, to rid the pain I’m always feeling //
My souls bleeding, and leaking the words on this page that your reading //
The words that I’m speaking come from a heart that’s always grieving //
Always reaching for the life that I’m achieving //
We need to elevate, be great
Need a taste, of a better place
Face another race without a trace of hate
I’m soulless, I have no history //
My life’s a mystery, I need a wrist to bleed //
Need a rule to breach //
Wreak peace with my freedom of speech //
I’m stuck, I’m frozen, my wounds are forever open //
Every dream is broken, every word is spoken //
Its clear, I’m not chosen, I need space //
I’m in a daze, my life is like a deadly maze //
I watch it steadily cave, as I remain without a name //
On this deepest level of pain //
My face always shows the shame //
We need to elevate, be great
Need a taste of a better place
Face another race without a trace of hate
Not one tear is shed for me, not one man has bled for me //
I dwell on anti-ecstasy, I can’t rest in peace //
I’m the only one down here, the rest are free //
I’m stressed, there is no relief, I’m blessed but it can’t be seen //
I’m on my last breath, but I can’t die, I’m past death //
So cold, I haven’t even laughed yet //
Can’t get past it, this world is hurting me //
My sins are burning me, that’s my life for eternity//
Can’t turn a cheek, I have to learn and teach //
To reach my yearn for peace //
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