dawg, dawg, dawg......iight calm down, whack off yo caps for a start, and lets decipher this, ur flow was none, ur wordplay was elimentary, u need to seriusly elivate ur shit big time, man rap aint just bout bein angry and agrresive, ur verses shoulda been like dis.....

U BIG N BAD/
THEN STEP UP/
N I SUDJEST U REST UP/

u see it dont work n puttin it down how u did it still dont work, in truth its whack, but read some ppls shit around here and take advise and learn.

peep ma shit called Morals.............

keep tryin..