very nice peice weezy,like eveyrone else ahs said before,nicely written,good story,emotion everything like that.was all good...very very well written...good plot line,thickened as it went along,ended well...didnt expect him to die though.wich is good,twistinthe end is always good...luck on the topical league,champs got some competion now,very nicely done.


could you peep my step left verse?if you got the time.