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sigh...
oh well...
you couldnt excpect to be in a crew with these lyrics surely?...
certain kiss?...special miss? what?...dun this is the internet...ermmm,you shouldnt ttake thi shsit seriously yaknow...i mean.i just put shit on here to see what people think,i do my own thing mostly,this is jsut another place to get critique to build....you have to build dun....tis the key...buildin,elevation...you have to up...your vocab was lacking...so was you rrhyming,some parts didnt rhyme...i dunno what your tlakng about in half of this...
you need to up,but youve decided to leave,and quit...instead of building,and becoming better...oh well.
A.i ? didnt let you in for the reason that your still elevating...the leaders are away,and so far have not been recruiting for a while now anyway...thats why...but even if they were here,i doubt theyd accet...theyve turned away harder cats then you...i mean..ah fuck it.
you jsut have to elevate.
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