thia ahit was nice..you kept your head above water if you kno what a mean.some people drown in their lines and end up chockin cause they just cant rhyme summat anymore but you stayed up..real potential whe you can do that........although just incase thry not to rhyme with the same kinda of line all the time eg

see before i met u i was starting to stress, the life i was living a fucking mess, shit getting me down and starting to depress,bowing before god praying to be the next 1 he bless/1
noone gave me the slightest respect, had nobody by myside or there for me to protect, me from this malice which was so direct, i was the victim of hate and neglect/2

you pulled it off so well although you did make everything rhyme...i like it when someone can pull that off.......reall emotion aswel